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October 08 The SniperThe young Canadian Private scrambled for cover behind the blown wall of the historic city. Dusk was settling in.
“Damn it” he screamed under his breath, barely hearing himself over the pounding of his racing heart.
A road side bomb had destroyed the APV he had been riding in. He scanned the area, remembering the training he received just a week before. “Watch out for snipers! They like to use snipers to pick off any who survive”.
He checked himself out. Nothing broken, a small amount of blood dripped from his nose. It was the damn ringing in his ears that was driving him crazy. And just above the ring he could hear the moans of a fellow soldier. Looking back at the mangled hunk of steel he had just been riding in he could see an arm, but just the arm, nothing else. The moaning soldier lay 3 meters from the wreckage, covered in blood, but alive. Smoke and flames rose from the APV.
“Stay down!” the young soldier yelled. “Keep quiet while I check the perimeter”. His eyes surveyed the terrain.
It was so familiar. His family had visited “The Plains of Abraham” when he was a teenager. His father told him all the history that created his country. Hell, he had even played hockey in this city not two years before. Now here he was, fighting for his life in what remained of “Old Quebec City”.
The Plains of Abraham were in front of him, the old Citadel lay in ruins behind him. It was bombed out the previous week as his unit rooted out the rebels. “Freedom Fighters” they called themselves. Heroes to many in Quebec, reviled by the Canadian Government, ignored by many in the rest of the country. “How the hell did we get into this mess?” His father’s question reverberated in the young soldier’s mind. Politicians spending too much talking about issues and not enough solving the problems. Allowing an undercurrent of discontent to grow and totally ignoring a growing anger and resentment of a society isolated by history, with feelings of absolute hatred towards an “occupier” who subverted and systematically destroyed their culture. At least that was the rhetoric of the young militants who had rallied enough support to begin a revolution.
None of that mattered. Right now he had to find a way to survive.
The sound of movement startled him. The turret of the personnel carrier slowly opened and smoke poured out. His Corporal began to climb out. “What is he doing?” thought the Private. But the Corporal was disoriented, blood streamed down his face and the prospect of burning to death drove him to ignore training.
“Get your head back into the Lynx….” The bullet beat his words to the Corporal.
The body of the man jerked violently as the whistling sound of a bullet passed over the young Private’s head. “SHIT!”. The body went limp, draped face down on the APV. Flames engulfed it.
“Where is that son of a bitch!?” The young Private’s head snapped in the opposite direction and captured a shadow moving in the distance. “How fitting, the bastard is using the Wolfe Monument as cover!”.
Training took over. Fear was no where to be found. He moved quickly and quietly as he manoeuvred into position. The enemy was out there, he just had to find him. Using the brush as cover, he approached the enemy’s position. Looking back he could see the burning APV. It seemed so far away and he had covered a lot of ground in a short time.
Just ahead was the Wolfe Monument. The young Canadian Private raised his weapon and peered through the sight. There he was, standing behind the monument, his sniper rifle still pointed at the APV. The crosshairs of the Privates weapon focused just behind the sniper’s left ear. “He has no clue I’m here or that his life is about to end” The Private squeezed the trigger and a bullet exploded from the weapon.
The young private moved cautiously towards his fallen prey. “Would there be others around here?” The sound of Canadian troops and armoured vehicles swarming the area made that unlikely. The body lay face down in a growing pool of blood. He moved to stand over it. He gasped for air as he turned the body over. “Rene! Oh Shit”. It was his defence partner. They had played together on the same Junior A hockey team that visited Quebec City just two years earlier.
The Young Canadian Private stood frozen. His shoulders drooped, the butt of his gun touched the ground. In a haze he began to walk away, his gun dragging behind him. “How the hell did we get into this mess?” July 08 WritingThe post below is a short story I wrote. I was inspired to write this, but that inspiration is now gone. Ah the fickleness of on line relationships.
I still like what was written and this is as good a place as any to archive it. In writing it I wanted explore the writing of romance and try drawing more imagery from my words. If you take time to read it I hope you enjoy it. It’s 775 words; a little over my self imposed limit for short stories, but hey, I am not one to follow rules or dictates, so I figure its OK.
Last week I received part two of the latest “Turn-By-Turn” novel I’m involved in. I just got around to reading it today. Nicely done Chris! I’m responsible for the next chapter and have two weeks to move the story forward.
I’m planning on going roller blading this afternoon, so I’ll spend some time digesting the first two chapters and working on the next.
I often wonder if I could make a living writing. I enjoy it and while not a English major, I think I do OK at it. Well; it gives me something else to think about and then not explore any further! Such is my personality.
Enjoy your weekend and “The Sunset” The SunsetThe motorcycle rumbled to a stop. The lake lay in front of us, the bustle of the small city behind. My female passenger swung her slender leg across the back rest and settled to the ground. A broad smile lit her lovely face.
I swung my leg off the bike, planting myself so I could see the angel I had been carrying. She removed her helmet thick black hair fell gently around her neck. She gave her head a shake, puffing her hair and combing it with her fingers.
“What have I done to deserve this?”, I thought. “What does this lovely woman see in me? Dear God, don’t let me wake from this dream!”.
“What are you looking at with that wolfish grin?” she laughed as she handed me her helmet.
What could I tell her? Her beauty was captivating. Dark eyes, set in a face that radiated. Soft luscious lips, rich with the bright red lipstick she wore. Black hair fell below her slender neck and made a perfect frame for every feature of her face that was perfect.
I extended my hand and she slipped her hand into mine, intertwining her fingers with mine with the gentleness of a child. So soft…so warm…so comforting. “Come on,” I said squeezing her hand gently, “we’ve got a sunset to catch”.
My heart skips as I lean in and kiss her cheek.
“What was that for?” she asked in a teasing voice.
“It was to tell you I love you and am thankful you are here with me right now”
We walked the path leading to the shoreline, two people, brought together by chance, drawn together by mutual respect, admiration and growing love. The heat of the day lingered as night approached. It enveloped them, while the cool lake breeze wrapped around their cheeks.
“The sun is almost down, quick, let’s find a place to sit to take it in.” I coaxed her to a half trot.
We approached a bench, two middle aged adults, youthful with love, laughing as we settled into the bench and drew into each others arms. The kiss was not unexpected, but it halted everything as we took each other in. Gently, softly, our lips pressed against each other’s. Seconds passed as minutes. Time was of no importance.
“Whew!” she said as our lips parted and she pressed herself into my body and nestled her head into my neck, “that was wonderful!”
The next words out of my mouth came from a place I kept locked for too long. A bad relationship had made me bitter, cynical, suspicious, but now the walls were melting.
“You bring out the best in me.” I whispered into her ear, “I feel like a youngster experiencing love for the very first time. Every moment I spend with you is new, exciting, exhilarating.” I turned to look into eyes that reflected back a fiery spirit and were screaming – you haven’t seen anything yet!
The sun slipped slowly into the horizon. A bright orange, fiery ball that created a yellow and red sky that no artist could ever capture on canvas. We cuddled together watching – expecting steam to rise and the sound of a sizzle to come from the water. I could feel her breath on my neck, her pulse against my body.
Oh, how it excited me! Is this what it feels like to be in love and to be loved back? I don’t want this feeling to leave, I don’t want to let go of her for fear the moment will never be recaptured. But don’t be silly. She is with you, her body pressed gently with yours. You are her’s, she is your’s. That is the way God meant it to be.
The sun slipped behind the horizon. We stood without saying a word, instinctively knowing what each was about to do. We wrapped arms around each other and slowly made our way back to the motorcycle. She turned to faced me and drew close to my body. I let my hand rest gently in the small of her back and gently pulled her towards me. She closed her eyes as she once again pressed her luscious lips against mine. My knees felt weak, my heart raced, I was short of breath. I need to take her all in, appreciate her beauty, understand her passion, satisfy her desires.
“I love you.” My words were soft, spoken within inches of her face. I hadn’t been able to say that for years.
“I love you.” She replied with meaning that came directly from the heart. “Now let’s get home and explore that word some more.” |
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